Post Time: 06/01/2009 18:28:58 |
josh416
Total Forum Posts: 1 |
I appreciate the work that your organization is doing, and I enjoyed reading the newly updated article on melatonin. I noticed a typo on page 6, 3rd paragraph under the "mood control and depression" subheading. In the last sentence of the paragraph, "foe" appears, rather than the correct "for."
People skeptical of the reality of EMF-related health issues always look for such issues in EMF lit in an effort to de-legitimize the source, so I think it's especially important to be vigilant in editing these things.
Thanks again,
Josh |
Post Time: 06/01/2009 20:39:34 |
alasdairP
Total Forum Posts: 173 |
Josh
Many thanks for pointing this out. It will be corrected soon. We are a very small organisation and prioritising which articles should be revised and which new ones should be written and what sort of improvements could be made is always difficult. If you have ideas about this, please send them to info@powerwatch.org.uk.
Thanks again
Alasdair
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